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Read It Should Have Been You, a Short Story on the Future of Death

Read It Should Have Been You, a Short Story on the Future of Death

[Beginning Log File 0289]

Fuck you.

No, significantly, fuck you.

My assortment website hurts notably dangerous in the present day and I’m cranky, however I have to focus on you. You, the one with the everlasting bag underneath your left eye after you let your dumbass cousin hack your automotive and switch the ADT off. Your face slammed into the console, which turned your orbital bone into an assortment of mismatched, razor-sharp puzzle items that attempted to seek out houses in the gooey floor of your eye, however it was Shakyra who flew by way of the windshield and wetly slid down the hood till she plopped onto the street. The ambulance had already been deployed the second she crashed into the automotive in entrance of you two, however when it arrived 5 minutes later, its sirens weren’t even on. It eased to a cease and two paramedics casually slid from the entrance seat. The street sensors had already advised them she was lifeless.

You have been spared from the full visible impact of her damaged, bleeding physique since you’d gone briefly blind in that left eye. However you knew. The paramedics knew. The onlookers, who cruised by in their very own self-driving automobiles, by no means stopping, by no means slowing down – they knew, too. However you weren’t considering of Shakyra as silly then, not but. All you have been considering as the paramedics guided you onto the stretcher was, “No.”

Shit, I hate enthusiastic about that. Fuck, fuck, fuck –

[Log file recording terminated. Progress saved.]

…Shit. Settle down. They’re listening, of course they’re. They all the time are.

However again to you. That accident is the place my story begins.

When the blood commerce began, you and Shakyra simply shook your heads and laughed. “White people,” you agreed. However that positive as hell didn’t cease you from slipping into some seedy pit of a plasma middle whenever you have been lastly fired out of your job at Meijer – a very dangerous migraine had you vomiting throughout the produce part like some horrible parody of The Exorcist.

You keep in mind The Exorcist, proper? I’ve turn into obsessive about artifacts from earlier than the Nice Elevation: films, TV, books, you identify it, I acquired it, even Dracula, which oddly was a bitch to seek out. Once I can’t fairly grasp onto you, I grasp onto these films. They remind me that there are a lot worse fates than demise…Not that I actually need reminding, anymore.


“Feeling better?” Katya asks me, a placid smile on her shiny face.

“Yes,” I say, as a result of there’s nothing else she needs to listen to. I settle again down on my mattress and switch to stare out at the cloudless grey sky. The little digital assistant console on the nightstand sparkles blue 3 times earlier than the mild goes out. Not lifeless, simply resting.

“That’s good. Repressing your feelings isn’t good for stress levels…a little emotional release here and there can be really helpful.” She provides me the practiced stare of a fed-up, underpaid RN, although her immense wealth is why she’s right here in any respect. “Just don’t overdo it, okay?”

Warning heard loud and clear. “Okay.”

Katya Belaya is 115 years previous. She’s labored as a hematology nurse virtually so long as I’ve been alive, at thirty-four. That was when analysis round blood remedy actually kicked off.

She doesn’t speak about her life earlier than the Nice Elevation a lot, however I’ve overheard bits and items throughout the chaos of shift modifications – she was retired, dwelling fairly nicely on the inheritance from her pricey previous husband’s demise, however then the ads began popping out in full pressure, promising everlasting youth for the proper worth. And this idiot truly believed it; she’s been supervising dumbasses like me ever since. Proper now, her bland smile appears to say, “Who’s the fool now?”

After simply ten years of remedies, she seems to be younger sufficient to be my mom.


That is the story of the way you overcame demise: You signed a contract.

You’d heard the rumors, of course. Everybody had: Wealthy previous individuals thought they might get hold of the key to immortality by getting common infusions of blood from younger, wholesome individuals…sorry, younger, wholesome, poor individuals. As a result of why in the fuck would you assist somebody like David Rockefeller stay even longer until it was the distinction between sleeping in your mattress for an additional month or dwelling in your automotive? So sure, you overcame demise since you have been too poor to die. The second these bullshit remedies turned out to not be so bullshit in any case, the coveted “good death” turned a luxurious prefer it by no means had earlier than.

You’re the perpetual movement gadget maintaining that luxurious conveniently obtainable to individuals like Katya. You spend rather a lot of time in these hospital rooms, these beds. They’re a lot comfier than something you may ever afford on your personal, let’s be clear. And the employees is simply all the time listening and watching and smiling as a result of they need you to be wholesome, pet.

I imply, what the fuck good is your blood should you – sorry, they – let your physique go to shit? Kale for everybody. Hurray.

There shall be raised bumps amid the corded muscular tissues of your higher arms – one for all sides. They’re as huge round as a penny, with the mass of a glass marble embedded beneath the floor. You’ll scratch at them typically, when nobody’s wanting – by no means in the hospital, although, that may be a degree of silly even you gained’t start to ponder – however they don’t transfer or compress.

When you have been to take, say, a knife – do NOT do that, however simply say someday you probably did – and make a small, clear reduce throughout that marble of tissue, you’d be engulfed by a ache so relentless that you simply’d instantly black out. Once you’d get up, any proof of your crimes can be gone, save for a pale scar that’d vanish inside a pair days.

Quickly, you’ll enter your go-to blood middle trying to rating sufficient for lease and your automotive – the demand has gone up. 3 times the cash. And when the nurse slaps a Band-Help throughout your internal arm and tells you you’re good to go, a person in a physician’s coat who you out of the blue, by some means, know is just not a physician will seem in the slim hole between the privateness curtains and ask you to take a survey. The nurse will slip away, as mild and soundless as a sunbeam, and the not-doctor will slowly ease into the chair she’s simply vacated.

You’ll keep in mind him properly, so nicely, even after many years move: the bald head with only a trace of brown fuzz, lengthy fingers and vast palms with bulging veins, beady grey eyes monitoring your each motion behind primary black frames. The frames are what give him away – they’re Mykita, that are costly as fuck. Your girlfriend at the time is (was) loopy about every little thing style. You’ll scoff at the thought of remembering this, and vow to get payback by forcing her to take a seat via a Hell’s Kitchen marathon.

The not-doctor has different plans. “When was the last time you lost someone you cared about?”

Many faces will flit by way of your thoughts as an unwelcome wave of longing seeps into your chest. However though she wasn’t the final, she was the most: Shakyra. You watched her die. You didn’t cease her. However you might’ve. You – silly, silly, silly you – didn’t. Why? You gained’t know. You by no means will.

The not-doctor will see one thing in your eyes, one thing he approves of. He’ll lean ahead, his legs planted shoulder size aside, and brace his forearms on his jean-covered thighs. Stare straight at you. Clasp his palms collectively, solemn. “What would it be worth to you,” he’ll murmur, voice thick with fake empathy, “to never have to experience that pain again?”

And that…your poor, sick bastard, that’s all it’ll take. He’ll clarify, utilizing approach an excessive amount of medical jargon, about what he needs to do – what he needs you to do. And also you’ll signal. Regardless that, deep down, you realize eliminating programmed cell demise wouldn’t have saved Shakyra, grief isn’t smart, so that you’ll signal. The nurse will reappear with a twin pair of syringes earlier than you’ve even completed the final curlicue on your signature.

“Everyone will have access to this,” the not-doctor assures you. “And for every person you refer, your payments will quadruple.”

However your girlfriend has (had) Sort 1 diabetes: unfit.

Your mom? Hypertension and bronchial asthma. Ask her to lose some weight first.

Father? Lung most cancers. Brother? Bipolar. You’re the dumbass with the completely puffy eye, however apparently that’s not a genetic flaw, only a common sense one. You’ll obtain marbles in your arms that completely cease the passage of time, so far as your DNA is worried, all so you’ll be able to spend the relaxation of your immortal existence “donating” blood to individuals who need to be buried as younger, lovely corpses.

Confused? Yup, it’s true: Katya, the not-doctor, and all the relaxation of the recipients…they don’t have the marbles.

You’ll maintain them for so long as they need to stay, then stand watch once they don’t.


As we speak is Katya’s Death Day. She is 137 years previous.

She has determined she’s seen every little thing the world has to supply, so it’s time. She picked out her coffin – glossy mahogany with golden accents – herself. She’s been with out blood transfusions for every week now. The attending physician says will probably be any minute.

They don’t say “death” anymore – it’s the “next elevation.” Half her household, simply as bright-faced and virile as she was, are drunk off their asses whereas she lies in the coffin, her respiration slowing, slowing, slowing…an extended pause, throughout which everybody and all the things all of the sudden sobers, stops…after which a moist rattle from her throat shatters the second and the merriment continues.

I hover close by; as soon as she’s lastly lifeless, I’ll have a brand new “nurse,” however who the hell cares. This valuable factor, demise, is one thing I possible won’t ever expertise. I dream of it, ache for it. I’m monitored too intently to down a container of bleach, or bounce off a roof. My knives disappeared from my kitchen many years in the past; my meals arrives pre-cut. Everybody I knew who was too “unfit” for immortality is lengthy gone. Naturally, there was no fanfare for them. Incapacity and sickness are for the poors, you realize. Should’ve made extra money, after which they might’ve died in well being as an alternative of illness. Should’ve taken higher care of themselves.

You understand, like I do.

Katya’s respiration stops once more, for lengthy sufficient that the DJ lowers the music till it’s only a faint pulse in my eardrums – like a heartbeat.

I stare at her softly rounded, rosy face; she’s sporting basis and concealer underneath her eyes for her nonexistent flaws and diamond earrings that glint beneath the mild of the crystal chandelier instantly above us. She’s lovely, and I need to drive a stake by means of her rotten coronary heart.

The physician leans over and presses her index and forefinger towards Katya’s throat. After one other pause, she proclaims, “Official time of death: 21:27.”

A refrain of applause and joyful shouts fills the room. I path my fingers over my higher arm, not even feeling the sting of my nails digging into the flesh, reflexively. I raise my different arm and get up my smartwatch with a scan of my retina.

“Log file 1076,” I whisper. “Those books were really fucking wrong about vampires.”


I’m being harsh, I do know. I’m sorry. This…this can be a lot.

Please, earlier than you stroll into that donation middle one final time…assume of Shakyra. Assume of her damaged physique, splayed throughout the floor. The detached stares of onlookers who felt she’d introduced it on herself.

Think about what her previous couple of seconds of consciousness have been like. Did ache rip by means of her like these ragged shards of glass? Did she sense her lungs filling with blood and phlegm? Did she choke? Gasp?

Think about it. And know that, although it’ll perpetually hang-out us each, I want it’d been you.

However I’ve gotta go: Katya’s alternative is ready, and I guess he hates having to attend.

Sydnee Thompson is a author and editor who’s unabashedly obsessive about all issues dying, particularly on the subject of her speculative fiction, which has additionally appeared in publications resembling Fiyah Lit Journal and Hearth Journal. You’ll be able to stalk her on Twitter @SydMT or go to her web site, shadesofsydnee.com.

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